Friday 12 June 2015

Caterpillar Shoes

Team Toru spent a week writing stories about a video we watched called "Caterpillar Shoes" from the website, The Literacy Shed.  We really enjoyed the story as it was very funny...
First we made a picture plan, drawing what happened at the beginning the middle and the end.  Then we began retelling the story using lots of adjectives.  We are publishing our stories on Monday, but you can check out our work at school on the wall... we would love you to come and have a look at our awesome Writing.

Here is the link for "Caterpillar Shoes", if you would like to watch it at home.  Click on the picture and it will take you to the Literacy Shed site.  :-)


1 comment:

  1. Thanks for sharing Team Toru. I was lucky enough to read some of your stories on Friday afternoon and I was so impressed with them. You are all such great writers using so many 'wow' words in your writing.

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